how's my driving // concrit ;;

I know that nobody's perfect, and I'm always more than happy to hear things that I might need to work on. Let me know how I'm doing in a comment here.
Am I Slaying to the best of my ability? Or do I need to seriously hit the mats to keep from driving the stake through their forehead instead of their heart?
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